Category: Writers Block
The sights and sounds of fights break out,
And tention starts to rage.
Trying hard not to cry or shout,
I fall, and force memories to fade.
How could this happen,
Especially to me?
How did I bring this stress upon my family?
Why am I the one to worry,
When getting laid off is the least of my problems.
Why does the tention build up inside,
I feel alone, and all I can do is hide.
Do I have something against my life at home?
Something that can never be known.
Maybe it’s just a dream,
Maybe I need to wake up.
Why do I feel the way I do?
Already at my limits with you.
Stressed as can be,
If only you could see.
I’m not the blame,
For the problems you have.
I don’t know wheather to feel upset or mad.
I’ve kept my promises, and you never kept yours.
I’m now on my way to closing these doors.
How could you do this,
Everything was a lie.
Now all I can do is watch the birds fly.
I know I need help,
I’m willing to get what I can take.
You have just put me through hell,
And you didn’t know my heart would break.
I always thought family stuck together,
Through good times and bad.
I know I’ve made some mistakes,
And I know I can’t take them back.
I’m sorry if I ever did you wrong,
I’m still trying to stay strong.
I just can’t stand the the everlasting fight,
All the time, day and night.
I hope one day issues can resolve,
But for now I’ll just take the call.
You guys are my life,
You mean everything to me.
So how can I not worry.
You guys are so important, and I would never want you to die,
I’m just tired of all the lies.
I sit and wait for those words of love,
But all I have to say is written above.
The sights and sounds of fights break out,
And tention starts to rage.
Trying hard not to cry or shout,
I fall, and force memories to fade.
A very good poem. Very insightful when it comes to conflict between family members? lovers? friends?
Very good.
Thanks for posting it.
Bob
It's no problem, I love to write
Hey, it was a good poem. At some point, everyone can relate to this one. Yeah very insightful. Easy to understand, good use of words, and well written. Write another poem hehe
This was a very good poem. I'd have to disagree with the above poster though, and say that I think your wording could be a little better than that. In some places in the poem, rhythm is lost.